I've got here thanks to a post on reddit and couldn't help but notice a lot of spelling errors and use of wrong words, with the most common being "brake" instead of "break". You can see that in the human and undead racial abilities. Another common mistake is using "with" instead of "by" in the abilities. "Increases X with 20%". No, it's "increase X by 20%".
Also, on the factions page (not of the specific ones), the Domination part has "no one can brake the vows", "None dears to challange".
A lot of text about the factions and races is also written in a way that doesn't make sense, sometimes due to bad writing, sometimes due to missing commas. Bearans "Once challenged only death itself can stop those brute beings". This makes no sense, but i can tell it's meant to be "once challenged (COMMA) only death"
Please be mindful of "english is not our first language". Whatever your native language is, if you saw anything written in it with a lot of obvious mistakes, you'd think it was something made with low effort. If you're not sure if you got something right, ask someone from the community or, if it's not something that the community can know, then get someone who knows english to read and correct it.
A bit off topic, the "Game + -> Story" link doesn't work, it just reloads whichever page you're in.
I've got here thanks to a post on reddit and couldn't help but notice a lot of spelling errors and use of wrong words, with the most common being "brake" instead of "break". You can see that in the human and undead racial abilities. Another common mistake is using "with" instead of "by" in the abilities. "Increases X with 20%". No, it's "increase X by 20%".
Also, on the factions page (not of the specific ones), the Domination part has "no one can brake the vows", "None dears to challange".
A lot of text about the factions and races is also written in a way that doesn't make sense, sometimes due to bad writing, sometimes due to missing commas. Bearans "Once challenged only death itself can stop those brute beings". This makes no sense, but i can tell it's meant to be "once challenged (COMMA) only death"
Please be mindful of "english is not our first language". Whatever your native language is, if you saw anything written in it with a lot of obvious mistakes, you'd think it was something made with low effort. If you're not sure if you got something right, ask someone from the community or, if it's not something that the community can know, then get someone who knows english to read and correct it.
A bit off topic, the "Game + -> Story" link doesn't work, it just reloads whichever page you're in.
Hello Mano Doido,
thank you for opening a topic regarding this.
We will take immediate care about solving the mentioned errors. Thank you once again.
Kind regards,
Armegon
Hello Mano Doido,
thank you for opening a topic regarding this.
We will take immediate care about solving the mentioned errors. Thank you once again.
Kind regards,
Armegon
I ran into the project via Reddit and noticed the same thing. I'm not quite sure how deep you are in the financing stage (the Reddit post stated that an investor was already interested) but I wanted to reach out as a professional editor/proofreader myself, should you be interested in potentially hiring that out. I can handle all Website text, all game text, emails, etc. to ensure that everything flows well, word usage is correct, things are condensed/fleshed out as necessary, spelling and punctuation are correct, and everything else is flawless to make the project a lot more professional. I've actually reported numerous misused/misspelled/missing words to companies like Blizzard (World of Warcraft) in the past because they don't seem to be able to hire decent editors despite their large budgets!
Thanks for reading this!